This review was posted 12 March 2000 Sunday
This review pertains to Chapters 1 through 18.
"Whilst I was not initially sure of the characterisation I have found this to be a very well written story which I want to hear more of. The first couple of chapters are not as good as the rest, they seemed less realistic, but once the story gets going it is very good. There is some great humour, sometimes the people do act seemingly out of character doing some very silly things, making this slightly less of a sensible story (personally I like silly touches though). The author has really managed to detail the close relationships of the team members well, capturing the familylike nature of their bond. So far the plot is very interesting, the storyline moves in surprising directions. The writing is excellently done, managing to capture emotion and thoughts, making it very moving as you can really feel what the characters feel."
Kernel Jack
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